Friday, March 31, 2006

Progress

Of sorts.

I've been mostly doing rewrites to Benfro book one, as suggested by my nice agent. But books three and four are slowly congealing into something vaguely resembling a story. As can be seen here:



Yes, you eagle-eyed readers, that does say 'how does it end?' at the bottom. A small problem, perhaps. Not insurmountable. I'm just not really too keen on the ending I had planned anymore. It's a bit too redolent of Philip Pullman's His Dark Materials (not that copying the master is necessarily a bad thing.) So I'm floundering about a bit looking for a suitable way to wrap up a four part fantasy about a dragon. Piece of cake, if I put my mind to it.

Other progress is on the froggy front. Today it's been warmer and things have begun to stir in the murky waters:



Sadly this also means that the trees have begun to flower and produce pollen. I've been sneezing like a good 'un all day. Joy is a hayfever season that lasts from the end of March until the beginning of October.

2 Comments:

Blogger Sandra Ruttan said...

Congrats on the progress! Sorry about spring though. Thank goodness I don't have seasonal allergies.

March 31, 2006 8:02 pm  
Blogger Dr. Lisa said...

Excellent mind map. However, I am wondering if rhubarb counts as fruit, technically.

April 01, 2006 12:30 am  

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